i’m still alive
just
really really
busy
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Ha! You call that a poem? lol j/k
Looking forward to seeing you at the readings next week!
ok Jay, just for laughs:
i’m still alive [show this visually; use images, senses, etc. And use active verbs dammit!]
just [the word "just" implies less importance, which I'm assuming is not what you mean.]
really really [Does the repetition really serve your purpose? I don't think it's necessary.]
busy [What does "busy" mean to you? Give specific examples of being busy.]
What can I say? I learned from the best! hehe
I look forward to seeing you at the readings as well. Your comments on my post are super funny. Thanks !!!