Comments on: I swear http://infinitelyfly.org/i-swear/ Thu, 20 Nov 2008 21:53:44 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Jay http://infinitelyfly.org/i-swear/#comment-37 Jay Sat, 01 Dec 2007 05:09:58 +0000 http://infinitelyfly.org/?p=75#comment-37 I look forward to seeing you at the readings as well. Your comments on my post are super funny. Thanks !!! I look forward to seeing you at the readings as well. Your comments on my post are super funny. Thanks !!!

]]> By: beanay http://infinitelyfly.org/i-swear/#comment-36 beanay Fri, 30 Nov 2007 08:27:28 +0000 http://infinitelyfly.org/?p=75#comment-36 ok Jay, just for laughs: i’m still alive [show this visually; use images, senses, etc. And use active verbs dammit!] just [the word "just" implies less importance, which I'm assuming is not what you mean.] really really [Does the repetition really serve your purpose? I don't think it's necessary.] busy [What does "busy" mean to you? Give specific examples of being busy.] What can I say? I learned from the best! hehe ok Jay, just for laughs:

i’m still alive [show this visually; use images, senses, etc. And use active verbs dammit!]

just [the word "just" implies less importance, which I'm assuming is not what you mean.]

really really [Does the repetition really serve your purpose? I don't think it's necessary.]

busy [What does "busy" mean to you? Give specific examples of being busy.]

What can I say? I learned from the best! hehe

]]> By: beanay http://infinitelyfly.org/i-swear/#comment-35 beanay Fri, 30 Nov 2007 06:42:55 +0000 http://infinitelyfly.org/?p=75#comment-35 Ha! You call that a poem? lol j/k Looking forward to seeing you at the readings next week! Ha! You call that a poem? lol j/k

Looking forward to seeing you at the readings next week!

]]>