I swear

i’m still alive

just

really really

busy

3 Responses to “I swear”


  1. 1 beanay

    Ha! You call that a poem? lol j/k

    Looking forward to seeing you at the readings next week!

  2. 2 beanay

    ok Jay, just for laughs:

    i’m still alive [show this visually; use images, senses, etc. And use active verbs dammit!]

    just [the word "just" implies less importance, which I'm assuming is not what you mean.]

    really really [Does the repetition really serve your purpose? I don't think it's necessary.]

    busy [What does "busy" mean to you? Give specific examples of being busy.]

    What can I say? I learned from the best! hehe

  3. 3 Jay

    I look forward to seeing you at the readings as well. Your comments on my post are super funny. Thanks !!!

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